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Wednesday, March 14, 2007

latest drawing

figure i'd do this here too, since i was already on it.
and i am pretty proud of the image too.
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okay that's it.


Tuesday, August 22, 2006

chapter 3

Chapter: 3
Sneak attack - When all looks hopeless


“What is this?”
“Is it happening again”
“Why?”
Nicholai’s sleep was that of an unpleasant sleep. Once again he had the same dream.
His mind within a darkness in which he could not see an end, yet his feet ran on a solid surface. Other then the echoes of his heavy breathing and the sound of his shoes hitting the ground, the voice of the darkness called out to him again. But this time the words were different:
“Soon, I will be” It would say. “You can not run”
Then like before the nameless giant with eyes that glowed light green who looked at him, it’s figure a GARD in which Nicholai had never seen before.
Then like last, they are attacked by an evil crimson red twin, with eyes of red and an aura of evil and wings of a demon.
Once again the grayish GARD fell to it’s counter and died, then the crimson GARD turned it’s attack on Nicholai.

And once again Nicholai awoke in the middle of the night, his heart racing from the nightmare. “What is going on?” He asked himself as he looked around.
The fire had seemed to burn itself out and he was now in darkness. He could feel the dirt of the ground and the tree he had layed back on. He could hear the sounds of the animals and bugs that awoke at night.
His mind began to recollect itself and he began to remember what had happened so far.
“the dream was different in some way” he thought. He couldn’t sleep no matter how hard he tried. Nicholai looked up and through the spaces of the trees he could see the starry night sky. For once since his adventure had started, his world was finally calm. But if his adventure was anything like the stories he heard, then his calm would be short lived and even shorter as time went by. Unknowing to himself Nicholai fell back to sleep, knowing that when the next he awakes his world will not be calm.



Nicholai awoke once more, this time to a chaotic scene, as his new companions ran around collecting their thing and disappearing into the trees.
“Come on.” He heard a voice near him say. “We got to get out of here” It was Jennifer, she had come to get him.
“What’s going on?” he asked as he got to his feet.
“I’ll tell you later.” She replied pulling him over to trees on the other side of what was the camp fire.
Once through the trees Nicholai saw what he did not see that night. In a small clearing there were four GARDs, each with it’s own personality of design. Each was costumised to reflect it’s pilot. One was a warrior type that was knelt down, another a vehicle type resembling an armored jet loaded with weapons. The last two were animal types one a gorilla the other a horse.

The Jet type unit did not look like the jets we have today, It was sleek and long, It had guns on the side and top of it, It had missiles on it’s wings and had two thrusters in the back, and two on the wings which were pointed down, there were even two below the cockpit, one in the front the other in the back. It’s wings were not long and the unit itself was not tall and bulky, instead low to the ground and light. The front had a long hatch that looked as though the unit can store two passengers as well as the pilot who was Lohan. This unit was painted with a silvery grey with yellows and reds marking its caution points. This one was known as “G-125 Aero”
The warrior type GARD was small in size yet as tall as a normal GARD, there were no big weapons on it, although it did seem to have knives on it’s back and sides. It was black with golds, orange ands reds lining it. The cockpit of this unit seem to be in the stomach area of the unit and seemed big enough to fit three people, just that the other two would have to stand or something the unit seemed to belong to Jin who was already in his seat and activating his units systems. “G-182 Shadow Fire”
The gorilla type was the biggest in the group in width but not in length, it was colored with greys and blacks and had guns on it’s arms and shoulders, on it’s back it had a thruster pack that also had missile pods. It’s cockpit looked to be in the chest area and looked just big enough for two people. It looked like it belonged to Keo It was named “Gunner Kong”.
The horse unit was the most elegant one of the group it was colored with blues, purples, whites and light greens, Its main body was white and most of the armor was blue.
It had a spear connected to the right leg. Nicholai saw the word “GARD” appear on the screen in front of him followed by the name “G-06 Reliant”.

“Go,” Jennifer said leading Nicholai to the horse type unit. There was no slowing down, Once everything was ready –which did not take too long- The four units set off at high speed going over fallen trees, and dodging up right ones. It was amazing how fast everything went.
“What’s going on?” Nicholai asked again, he could not help but think that something was not right, that something bad was going to happen and there was nothing he could do about it.
“We have to get you to the Delvan fast.” Jennifer said as she piloted her unit.
“Why? What’s going on?” Nicholai kept insisting from his seat behind Jennifer.
“Imperial GARDs were spotted” She said still focused on her course.
It only took them minutes when they reached the edge of the forest.
Beyond the trees there was a great stretch of land as far as the eye can see. Nicholai was amazed at the site, he had never seen plains so far stretched.
Three smaller screens appeared on Jennifer’s display, each one of her comrades.
“What now?” the one of Keo asked. They had stopped at the edge of the forest to get their bearings.
“Head toward the city” she ordered, “we have to get them to Delvan, that’s our main objective” she told them.
They headed toward the city north of them as fast as they could forming a line with the fastest –being the Aero- to the slowest –the gunner Kong-.
Although shortly after, the reason they were running finally shown itself. Four Impierial GARDs came falling to the ground with out hitting it, then they sped toward the four with great speed, in a single file line.
“Move!” Jennifer called and the four got out of the way of the Impierial GARDs who now stood in front of them.
Three of the four Impiral GARDs were black and all the same warrior type. The fourth, the leader was green, it was the same one that had attacked the village. It was repaired and had taken to a persute for the two.
“Give us the boy and the girl.” The green GARD said, it’s voice still too hard to distinguish the gender. Another screen appear on Jennifer’s display, this time it was the pilot of the Green GARD. The pilot was wearing a mask and had a crimson red, black and gold armor which reflected the lights in the warriors cockpit giving the person a dark sence. The GARD itself had a long samurai sword.
For a minute Jennifer watched her screen thinking of a plan. Then her GARD lowered and the hatch opened.
“Go, get to Lohan’s GARD” she said to Nicholai. Nicholai waited for a minute before hearing “Go” again, he stood up and examined the distance between the two GARDs.
“Be careful.” He said before getting out. “you too” Jennifer said in response.
Then he made a run for Lohan’s GARD. One of the Impirial GARDs saw it and made a run toward Nicholai, went Nicholai saw this he stopped in fear as the memories of his dream returned to him mirroring the event that was happening in front of him. In his mind he tried to run but the thought was too far out of reach and his mind only reflected the event with the shadow in his dream.
But just before the GARD could reach him it exploded and standing in it’s place was Keo’s Gunner Kong GARD. It took awhile for Nicholai to come out of his fearful trance, however he was awakened from it by Keo’s voice “What the hell are you doing!?” Keo’s voice yelled at Nicholai from the GARD. “get moving” it said as it readied for another attack. Nicholai looked at Keo’s GARD for a minute then continued his run, while the other the three GARDs began their face off and charged for the imperial GARDs. Keo went after a GARD with a ball and chain as he fired missiles at the enemy and drawing a bladed scythe weapon from it’s side. Jin went after a unit that had a sword, his unit fired its head machine guns and throw three knives at it’s enemy while it was running up to it. Jennifer attacked the green GARD charging at it as she aimed her units spear at the green unit.
when he reached Lohan’s GARD the cockpit hatch had already opened and he saw Lace sitting behind Lohan still in her cold mood. Without a word he climbed in and sat behind Lace.
“Go, get to the city” Jennifer’s voice came over the comm. Without question Lohan took to the order, and readied his unit for the flight as it slowly lifted off the ground. By the time he was at the right height the masked voice came over the comm. “Give us the boy and girl, or she dies” they turned to see that Jennifer’s unit had somehow become pinned down by the green Imperial GARD which was now holding the Reliant GARD down with one foot on the neck of the unit and had it’s sword pointed at the units head where the cockpit was located. By this time, the two black Impirial GARDs had been defeated by Keo and Jin who watched helpless at the site of their captain downed. The green GARD turned it’s blade adjusting it to prepared for the final blow, raising it’s sword over its head and aiming the blade for it’s target, when out of no where Jin’s GARD grabbed the green GARD from the back and had a knife pointed at it’s cockpit. “do it and you die” He said.
There’s was no warning other then a masked unseen smile from the pilot of the green GARD before it turned it’s weapon on Jin’s unit and stabbed the GARD in the lower chest area where the cockpit was. The blade crashed into the hatch and right through the unit where the cockpit was located.
There was no time to process what had happened the event gave Jennifer enough time to react with an attack using the spear on her unit by swinging the spear upward, but the green unit was fast and parried the attack by jumping back from it’s location.
Keo joined Jennifer’s side as she got up. And the two units stood ready to fight their enemy. They watch the green unit staring it down and waiting for it to make a move.
It was apparent to them that the green GARD’s pilot was too skilled and too fast for a head on fight.


Friday, July 07, 2006

Chapter two - Draft one

Chapter: 2

New Friends - First fight


                                          

            When Nicholai awoke his head was in pain as he got up. He found himself in his bed in his house which seemed to be untouched by the attack. Which he hoped was another horrible dream he had that night. But he knew that wasn’t true. He had no clue of what happened after he blacked out and wished to find out from someone, anyone he could.

 The sun was out and he could hear people talking outside of his room.

He got out of bed and headed for the door out of his room and opened it to find that in the next room there was a town meeting. They seemed to have been talking about the events from that night, and from what he saw, the thoughts everyone had in the room were not good thoughts. He could see and feel them glare at him with hate and discuss. Nicholai felt small and wanted to run and hide. So he did, he ran for the door out of the house and he continued running until he reached the spot under the tree he always went to.

 

            When he got there, he found Lace kneeling down back towards him. She was facing the tree, or something under it. He walked up beside her and noticed that she was crying, he then placed a comforting hand on her shoulder, she looked up at him and suddenly her mood changed. It wasn’t a good mood either. Something in her eyes told him that she did not want him to be there. It was hate. She began to whisper something so soft and quiet that he could not hear her.

  Apparently something had happened that made everyone, even his closest friend hate him. He backed away slowly from her, as she began to get up. Her whispers becoming slowly louder, then without warning she lunged at him with a killer intent grabbing him by the neck and bringing him to the ground. As she did her voice had become a yell “They were after you!” she repeated over and over as she had his neck in her hands squeezing titer and titer. Nicholai’s eyes widen and he stopped struggling with her when he heard what she was saying, and that’s when it all made sense to him as to why everyone hated him.

 A great sense of remorse came upon him, and he suddenly felt real sick. He could feel Lace’s hand growing titer around his neck and he wished she would just kill him already. To know that the GARDs were really after him made Lance’s death seem meaningless. Tears fell from his eyes as he cried. Lace was still in her anger but when she saw Nicholai cry, her anger subsided for that time and she let go of him and got off of him. Nicholai just laid there tears running down the side of his face. Lace sat by him knowing that he was feeling worse.  To have such a burden and blame be forced upon him like it was, was something that was tearing him apart inside.

 

After awhile of thought Lace got up and headed for the village, Nicholai had already stopped crying. He saw Lace get up and walk over him toward the village. He sat up and turned to her.

 “Where are you going?” he asked her. She stopped where she was and looked down and said “I need to talk to the elders.” She was just about to continue her walk when Nicholai said “I’m sorry, It should have been me.” Lace stood there a little longer then without a response continued down the hill.

  Nicholai looked up at the great tree that stood before him then followed it down to its great roots and then to the ground where he saw it.

 Nicholai got up and walked over to a stone plaque near the tree. He didn’t remember it being there before. He took a closer look and read “In memory of Lance, A hero among the rest, a great friend, son, and protector.” Nicholai could feel the tear threaten to come out as he read it. His best friend was dead and for all he knew, it was his fault. Lance died for him.

 Nicholai stood there for a long while partly to say his respects and ask for Lance’s forgiveness. But also because he was afraid of what everyone will say, think and do when they see him.

 Near the plaque Nicholai saw that everyone placed a flower there in respect to Lance. Then he saw just below that plaque a small shiny necklace that very much resembled Lace’s.

 “Maybe she dropped it.” He thought. “I know one thing. If Lance were here, he would want her to keep it in memory of him.” He said to himself.

 He stuck the necklace in his pocket and took a deep breath as he closed his eyes and turn to the village. “I guess I should go down there.” He said as he began his walk.

  When he got to the bottom of the hill he saw Chris, Markus, Timmy, and Lace gathered in a small group. They were discussing something so he decided to join them.

 “We should leave now, while everyone’s recovering.” Chris said

 “Your right, I’ll get my things.” Lace agreed then ran off toward her home.

Nicholai had just reached the group. When the remaining company turned to look at him.

 “What’s going on?” he ask a little uncertain.
 “Chris, why don’t you tell him while I get everything ready.” Markus said. Chris nodded and walked over to Nicholai.
“Timothy, I will need your help” Markus said and the both of them left to their home.

 

 “We need to leave the village.” Chris began as he walked with Nicholai back up the hill one arm over Nicholai’s shoulder.

 “We do? Why?” Nicholai asked in wonder.

 “To protect it” Chris stated with a partly triumphant voice. “Their after you, so now that they know where you are, they will continue to return.” Chris continued.

 “Who?” Nicholai asked with a little fear in his tone.

“The Zarian Empire” Chris answered.

“Wait, but aren’t they the good guys?” Nichlai asked spellbound

Chris gave him a look of disbelief then said “Would good guys do this” as he point over his shoulder at the remains of the village.

Nicholai looked down “No, I guess not” he said quietly. “But if that’s true then why are we taught different” Nicholai asked looking at Chris.

Chris looked up at the tree at which they had stopped at, then after a time said “Because it’s the victors who write history.”

It didn’t take them long to prepare. Nicholai figured it’d be best if he didn’t see his parents in fear that they might try to stop him. So he decided to go with Chris back t his home, waited for everyone there. 

  Once Chris, Lace, and Nicholai were ready they waited outside of the Markus’ house.

It wasn’t long before they felt a rumbling and saw the ground in front of the open up to reveal three flight-dragon personal GARDs.

 

Personal GARDs were small one person GARDs that were used for transport and protection in small areas that were too small for a normal size GARD.

  The dragon type GARDs were armor like GARDs said to be real dragons whom evolved into these. There were three types of dragon types when it came to the personal size GARDs. There was a land type which were slow but quite strong, the air type that came in different forms and were fast, and the sea type which were only good in the water where their speeds were unrivaled.

 

Standing next to them was Timmy and Markus, and next to them were several bags that needed to be loaded on to the GARDs.

 “Here are your transport.” Markus said as Timmy and Chris began to load the bags onto either side of the GARDs.

 “There’s only three.” Nicholai said party asking.

 “Because only three of us are going” Lace said as she walked past him and loaded her bags on to her own GARD.
 The dragon-type personal GARDs were blue, green, and white. They had long necks and two front claws and two hind legs designed for high jumps into the air. They had long tails and two big long wings which were at the moment folded.

 Lace had taken the green one leaving the white and blue.  So Nicholai took the white. Leaving the last one for who ever was going to use it.

 “Nicholai!” Timmy called to him. He was holding a sheathed sword. “here” he said as he tossed it up to him. Nicholai caught it and unsheathed it revealing a fine crafted silver double-edged blade. On it there was writing that seemed oddly familiar to him, yet he could not read it. He swung it around as he heard the blade cut through the air. Then he took one last look at it before sheathing it.

“Like it? That sword’s yours” Timmy said.

Nicholai looked at him for a time. Then asked “what do you mean mine?”

But before Timmy could answer he was called over by his father.
 Nicholai hooked the sword to his belt and took a look around him. He watched Lace for a while thinking of what she was thinking. There was no expression on her face or in her eyes so it was very hard to tell. He then looked over at the blue GARD and saw that it was Chris who was going to be the pilot for it.

 

Once they were done loading the GARDs Markus told them to head for the Capital city east of the Tenjal forest. There they will find what their looking for. The trip would take close to three days. So with this information they set their GARDs for final fight preparations then one by one they opened the GARDs wing and launched into the air Lace went first then circled the area waiting for the other two. However before Nicholai launched, Chris told him that he would catch up to them later. Chris said that he had something to take care of in the other direction. Nicholai agreed with some uncertainty to what Chris had to do. But he trusted him and trusted his words.

 

 The launch of his GARD was something Nicholai had rarely done. He had flown in a GARD before, he even learned how to pilot one. But he never got over the fear that something could go wrong.

 He got his GARD to open it’s wings which seemed to expand for some distance. It’s wings were reddish with a wed like design that looked sort of like a lizards feet. Then with certainty he pulled back on the reins of the GARD.

 

The personal size dragon GARDs reflected it biological count parts, as they were controlled with reins much like a horse. The way you hold and what you do with the reins will decide what the GARD itself will do. The GARDs would also at times show their biological side and act as an animal would, giving cries and clicks and other sounds as if they were communicating to each other, as well as other actions. The truth to if they were living creatures was still an unproven theory.   

 

The GARD lifted its long neck and launched itself into the air giving a small screech as it flow upward into the sky. Nicholai could feel the rush of adrenaline as he felt the wind blow past him with great speed. He didn’t want it to end, for that short time he had forgotten the events that had happened, until he looked back hoping that Lance had followed him as always. However as he did he remembered that Lance was no longer with them.

 He then banked off and lowered his GARD to where Lace’s one was he remembered all the times the three of them would fly with the three GARDs and he would imagine that the three of them were on some grand quest even though they stayed close to the village. They would go no more the 50 yards out. He remembered how they would race to a point and back, and of the times when he and Lance would try to impress Lace by performing air stunts, and how Lace would out perform the both of them. Those days however were gone now, that he knew.

 

 The two waited for Chris to launch and watched him leave to the west as they headed east. They didn’t know what Chris had to do, they only knew of what they had to do. Nicholai couldn’t help but look back and watch the only home he knew fade off into the distance. Would he ever see it again? That question rang in his head. Looking down he knew that the only way he would ever see it again is when the evil whatever it maybe was eliminated.

 Until then his home will always be in danger as well as his friends and family.

 

They traveled for what seemed like hours, large fields of greens, yellows, reds, and blues past below them and mountains of whites, grays, greens, browns, blues and silvers pasted on the right of them, sometimes on either side of them with phenomenal speed. All through out the trip neither one spoke a word, occasionally Nicholai would look over at Lace to see how she was doing. But all she did was stair straight ahead, what she was thinking and how she felt was a mystery to him.

 He then looked down at his new sword to admire it a little more. “What did Timmy mean by “It’s your”?” he thought to himself. What was the reason for it?

 

  It had been a true total of twelve hours before they had finally reached the Tenjal forest. It was an ancient forest, it’s trees raised higher then any trees in the world. It was the passing point between the great deserts and the green plans. On the other side of the forest was a whole new world of heat and sand. It was said that the other side was a vishious place with many pains and sorrows, deseat and thievery. That nothing there was what it seemed. The two weren’t sure themselves on if those stories were true, all they did know was that they were soon going to find out.

 Lace was ahead of Nicholai, when she stopped and the edge of the front of the forest she waited awhile for Nicholai to catch up.

 They stayed there for a while thinking of weither it would be easiest to go over or through the forest. Many went over for the creatures within the forest were many and dangerous, that even though it was a two day trip through, the smart travelers kept going till they reached the end. How ever there were those who were brave and either went through or stop for the night. The weak ones were never heard from and the strong would get through. For a forest as big as it was even half way to the top of it was a good deal dark to where you could not see the floor level.    

“So, what do you think?” Nicholai asked Lace “the sun is setting, I think we should make camp here then continue in the morning.” He suggested.

 Still Lace did not answer. Instead she brought her GARD around and flought towards the trees at full speed then at the last minute banked upward. It took her only a few minutes to get to the top at that speed, she then stopped and took a long hard look at the horizon over the forest squinting her eyes at the setting sun, then she looked down at Nicholai then back at the horizon.

 Nicholai had no idea what she was planning. He decided to fly up to where Lace was, so that he could try talking to her and finding out her plans.

 It took some time and thought, however they eventually decided to go over the forest. If they ran into any Imperial GARDs they would duck down and fly through the forest until it was safe enough to come out again.

       

            They had traveled for 12 hours in the cold windy climate. For those hours they had not spoken to each other. However Nicholai would ever so often look over at Lace to see how she was doing. Her face was still emotionless and hard to read.

 

 Everything seemed to go well until they saw it, four Imperial GARD (warrior type) units. In the front was the leader, a custom GARD, it was black, green and blue. On it’s left arm was a red symbol with stated that it was the leader of the group.

The others were normal Imperial GARDs with blacks, greens and blues.

 Once Lace had seen them a big and evil grin appeared on her face. She was not thinking properly. She increased her speed and headed toward the Imperial GARDs. They had spotted her and started firing at her. But Lace dodged every shot.

 As she headed close toward them the clouds became dark and big, covering the area in a great shadow.

  Then out of no where, hale and huge rocks began to fall from the sky. The rocks and hale were not big enough to cause damage to the GARDs however, just dents in the metal.

 However, after a few minutes the storm of rock and ice became more fierce, and another element was added. Fire mixed with the rocks began to pore down on the Imperial GARDs  this time ripping through their armor. One by one the enemy GARDs fell victom to the onslaught of elements.

   The lead GARD pilot was good however, as he dodged the rain of flaming rocks. But his luck only held out for a short time as he was struck in the left arm. The arm was ripped from the units socket and fell toward the trees below. He had made the mistake of letting the event phase him long enough to where he had become over powered.

  All that time Lace’s GARD had weaved in and out between the units trying to find a good spot for a close range kill. She did not know what or how the storm happened, but she thanked whatever god or gods caused it. for without it her enemies would have struck her down quickly.    

 

As the lead Imperial GARD pilot realized the result of his mistake he began to think of his family, his wife and children who would never see him again. Then as his unit fell he decided that his death would not be in vane. He took aim at Lace and fired just before a huge chunk of flamed rock crashed through his units cockpit crushing him as it came out on the other side. The unit exploded in mid-air.

 

  The shot fired from the enemy GARD, Lace did not catch in time. The shot struck the left wing of her GARD and everything went black.  

   To Nicholai the whole battle had taken no more then a minute. The storm stopped right when Lace’s GARD was hit. He saw as it plumited toward the burned ground of where the rain of rocks happed fallen. Up until that moment everything had gone so quickly, but once Lace was hit, everything seemed to slow down.

  Nicholai felt helpless. He didn’t know what to do. He was going to lose another friend that he cared for, and he could do nothing to help her. He closed his eyes hoping that he would wake from another nightmare. But it was no use, this time it wasn’t a nightmare. This time it was real.

  Just as he gave up hope, he felt his GARD increase in speed. He had not done anything. The GARD as acting on it’s own, and something told him that the GARD knew what it was doing.

 It’s speeds became remarkably fast that Nicholai had to lean forward in fear of falling off.

Once the GARD had reached a close distance to Lace’s, The GARD went into a corkscrew spin right under Lace’s GARD. The wind resistance generated by the spin hit Lace’s GARD and brought it to a guided glide to the ground.

The pressure of the spin and speed had made Nicholai dizzy and he pasted out once his GARD had landed safely in the clearing.

 

 

  Nicholai phased in and out of a deep sleep. When he was conscious for the short times, he heard voices of people talking, he also heard the sounds of GARDs. Were they Impirial?

He couldn’t tell. They didn’t sound like empirial GARDs. He couldn’t see anything, so he only had sound to go by.

  When he finally awoke it was dark and he found himself resting against the root of a large tree. In front of him there was a fire and four people sitting around it. One was a girl about his age. He only saw the back of her. She had a slender figure and nice long hair that stopped just below her shoulders.

 She turned towards him and he could make out some of her facial feachers, and that’s when he realized that she was beautiful. He had never seen anyone as beautiful other then Lace.  Her eyes were that of a kind hearted person, her smile was just the same. She was like an angel. One of which he had never seen before.

  “I see your awake finally” she said. Her voice was nice and yet a little playful like.

She got up and walked towards him, she wore a long pants and shoes, she had a sleeveless vest over a sleeveless shirt. Her hair came down a little past her shoulders.

 She was holding something as she walked closer toward him. It seemed to be a bowl with food. Nicholai tried to sit up from where he was, and found that not all of his strength had returned to him.

 Once she was close enough to him, she knelt down and handed him the bowl. “You shouldn’t push yourself too much.” She said with a smile.

 Nicholai looked around for a few seconds then realized that he couldn’t find Lace.

“Lace! Where is she?” he said in panic

The girl grabbed him by the shoulders and looking into his eyes to calm him down “Don’t worry, she’s safe.” She said pointing to the sleeping figure in the shadows.

Nicholai was relieved. “She regained conciousness a sometime before you. She had just gone to sleep a few hours before you awoke.” she reassured.

 “I don’t know how you did it, but you saved her life.” The girl said

 Nicholai began to remember what had happened, how Lace had battled the Impirial GARDs and how his GARD took control when Lace’s was shot down, and saved her.

“It wasn’t me” he said unsure and wearily.

The girl looked at him with surprise, “If it wasn’t you then who?” she asked.

Nicholai looked at her for a moment thinking of what to say. Would she believe that his GARD had flown itself to save her? Before he could think of an answer the girl interrupted him, “oh sorry, where are my manners?” she said back to her original expression.

 “I’m Jennifer, I’m the leader of this group.” She said pointing to the guys sitting by the fire. But somehow Nicholai could feel that he already knew that. Had he met her before? 

She took a seat to the side of Nicholai, and continued “We were told to come here, because you would be here.”     

  Nicholai was surprised in that she would know where he would be.

“We’re part of the allience against the Zarrian Empire.” She said looking at him.

 Nicholai had heard about a resistance force who called themselves an alliance force. But he never thought that he would meet them.

 “Aren’t you guys on the wrong side?” He asked, He was lead to believe that the Zarrian Empire was good, that they tried to help people.

  Jennifer looked at him in puzzlement. “Didn’t a Zarrian force attack you?” she asked at length.

 Nicholai looked at her, then answered “not really, we sort of attacked them.”

 She shook her head. “No, I mean your home.” she said. Nicholai was speechless. After a time he then asked “How… How do you know about that?”

 She smiled at him, “I have my ways” she said mockingly tapping her head with her finger and giving a little laugh.

 The two of them sat in silence for a while after. Then Jennifer told him in a compationate “Your something special, I can feel it in you” Nicholai wasn’t sure what she meant by that. But he shook off the thought and continued to eat. He then realized something, “You didn’t finish your introduction.” He said to her. “I guess I didn’t” she said looking up. She then got up grabbing Nicholai by the arm. “In that case you’ll have to join me and my team at the fire.” she said with a playful smile.

 Nicholai gave in and followed her to where the other members of her team were around a small camp fire. There were three people sitting around the fire, to Nicholai’s surprise they were all men.

 “Our princess returns with her prince” One of them said sarcasticly. The guy was of fairly big size. Jennifer quickly gave him an irritated look.

 The two of them sat down and she began to introduce them one by one.

 Since the guy had said something, she started with the bigger one. “This is Keo, Don’t mind anything he says” she said to Nicholai. She then pointed to the next one over, he was a medium built man, who seemed busy with some type of  small book that Nicholai had never seen before, a light seemed to shine from it. “that’s Lohan he’s kind of quite.” Lohan wore glasses similar to Nicholai, he also had shoulder length brown hair “He’s also my science officer.”

 She then pointed over at the last guy who in size between the two, he was sharpening a big knife. “that’s Jin, he’s my second in command.” The man looked up as she said it. Jin had short hair and was wearing what seemed to be an black sleeves outfit over a chain mail body suit. “He’s from an assassin group allied with us. I can trust him more then anyone.” Jennifer said.  

  She then turned to Nicholai “well, that’s everyone.” She said. “you should get some sleep, we have a busy day ahead of us, and I’ll tell you more tomorrow” Nicholai wanted to talk more but thought it best as well because of all he had been through.  He went over to where he had been. He watched them until he fell asleep.

 


Monday, February 20, 2006

Chapter one draft one

here's the first chapter of my story.. just only a first draft. so i may change alot of it.. but right now i think i'll just change the ending if this chapter. i sortta rushed on it.. so it doesn't feel quite right. plus there are some spelling errors.
I may change sme names as well
well enjoy. tell me what you thought of it (when you finish it) if you guys(and gals) liked the ending like this.. then i'll leave it(and change it in the "edited verson" which will be more for youth. tell me if you liked any of the characters and what not. well here goes:

 

                                                           Chapter: 1

                                       Changing Times - Face your Destiny

 

            Nicholai found himself standing in the vast darkness that seemed to show no end. No light, no sights and no sound. A dream, the same dream he had had for quite some days now. Over and over, the same thing, he would always find himself in this darkness. He began to walk in the direction he was facing looking for anything that would stand out, a light, a sound, an object, anything.

After a while of walking, the ground began to move and the seemingly normal ground was a metal surface. Two green glowing mechanical eyes looked straight at him, the glow of the eyes giving enough light for him to see what he was standing on.

It was a hand, a giant metal hand, which seem to belong to the figure in shadow currently staring at him. The figure brought him up to its eye level and it focused on him with a kind- hearted intent. Nicholai could feel its intentions and knew that it was not evil.

Although he also felt another presents in the same area a second one, one with hatred and a cruel heart. This was what Nicholai feared in the darkness.

A red glow began to illuminate the surrounding area making it easier for Nicholai to see the unit.

 

 The unit’s main color seemed a grayish silver color, with blue, black and red. The unit had no wings and no equipment that seemed like weapons other then the standard armaments. 

 

A voice came from behind him. “Welcome to my world.” It said making Nicholai turn around to see who had called him. The GARD he was standing on lowered him to the ground so that he could climb off.

 

GARD was short for General Armor Resistance Defender.

A GARD was a giant robotic unit that was used for anything from construction to war. There’re many types of GARDs, types for air, land and sea, Human or Warrior types, animal types –some that resembled cheetahs, bird, bears and such-, and vehicle types –like jets, tanks, hover crafts and more-. Each was custom built for their specific pilot’s skills and preference.

 It is said that the resistance against the Zerian empire created the GARDs first because of their lack of forces. But then the Zerian empire created some of their own, putting the war into a sudden stalemate. At that point the Zerian Empire named their units ZGARD which was short for Zerian Guidance Armor Resistance Destroyer, in aim to crush the resistance once and for all, which the ZGARDs were doing quite well.

 

To Nicholai’s surprise he saw a crimson red GARD in front of him. Its appearance was that of a demon with wings and a hateful spirit. Its face was bare and shown teeth capable of tearing a GARD apart. The crimson GARD seemed part bio that when it opened it’s mouth drool dripped from it’s sharp teeth. As much as it scared Nicholai it also made him wonder about it. He had never heard of a bio GARD, because all GARDs were fully mechanical.

“Who are you?” Nicholai tried to yell across to the red unit, but found himself merely asking it in a normal tone. The attempt made the fear in him freeze and he began to feel chilled. The voice of the red GARDs pilot laughed an evil and semi-psychotic laugh that frightened Nicholai to his bones. Did this person know something he didn’t?

Out of nowhere the crimson red GARD disappeared and like lighting struck the GARD that Nicholai was standing by. At first just the shock of the speed had surprised him. But then Nicholai noticed something that feared him to the point of sanity. The GARD he was with, his GARD had lost. The red GARD had come to fast for his to react. The crimson GARD had ripped its hand through its chest. His unit struggled to break free, but before it could do anything the crimson unit began to savagely tear Nicholai’s unit apart. With in seconds the GARD that Nicholai felt safe around was destroyed.

After it was done the crimson unit turned to NIcholai and the pilot’s voice came “Now it’s your turn”

 

Nicholai awoke calmly but with terror from the nightmare. His heart raced as his eyes wondered the dark room search for familiar ground.  He sat up and placing a hand to his face to stabilize his mind and keep him focused on what was happening around him.

In the quite he heard the wind blow outside his room. He looked out his window at the stars cape. His mind began to wonder at the mysteries of his dream. What did it mean? What was it telling him?

 The questions raking his brain, plus the returning fatigue were making him weary. So with that he returned to sleep hoping for some good dreams.

 

 

          The next time Nicholai awoke, it was morning. He had gotten up only to lay near by the tongo tree and daydream at his usual spot at the top of a hill near Leisen. So there he lay cross legged and stretched out under the tree.

 

It was there he met his first real friends and it was there they always stayed to get away from the harsh reality of their families and home, going there when they wanted to hide. The hill over looked the village to where they could see it from the front to the back.

Nicholai was 20 now. His eyes were not the best to where he had to where glasses. Nicholai was not a physical person so he let his strength decrease over his years.

He lay back under the tree that stood tall at the top of the hill, watching the clouds pass by and thinking of the dream he had. Dreaming and thinking of the dreams he had while he slept were his favorite of hobbies. He would daydream of heroic adventures like the ones he read in stories, and he would always plan to go on one, to explore the world and see what he could, to have stories written about him, and his wild adventures to save the world. That was what he wanted most of all.

 

Leisen was a peaceful village. Its population was small with 80 residents, with each person and family knowing the other, The village was located out of the way, surrounded by mountain and vast hills and having only one road leading in and out of the village. Every adult had the same secret and tried to hide it as best they could from their children, hoping that they would not have to get involved. The villagers tried their best to hide and not be bothered from the Zerian Empire.

 

 

“Back in the days of old, there lived a great hero by the name of Nicholai.” That’s what they would say. “The greatest hero that ever lived” The ancients would tell the young children. “A dreamer who had his dreams come true.” But the truth was that he knew that nothing like that could happen to him, there were too many problems for him. He was too afraid to leave his home. He didn’t know where to start. He just wasn’t ready to leave all that he knew. It was just too hard for him. He’d rather dream it then live the dream. It was the safest thing to do. 

 

Lance, Lace, and Nicholai, they were the best of friends. Lance was three years older then the other two, so he was like a big brother to Lace and Nicholai.

They treated each other like sibling, always watching each others back, supporting them and making sure they stayed out of trouble. Although as of late Lance was around less because he would almost always have business outside of the village. Nicholai and Lace at first wondered about it, but then thought nothing more about it, not knowing that the business was to do with them. 

Lace was not originally born in Leisen, She was brought there one day by a mysterious man who the three never saw again. She was a hard worker, top of the class and always hung around Lance. She was smart, beautiful, and almost always had a smile and Nicholai like her for that. Though he could see that Lace like someone else. She liked Lance; it was apparent, and all very obvious. Nicholai was a little jealous about it, but tried not to show it.

 

Nicholai had been so caught up in reminiscing about the past that he did not notice the person coming up the hill.

“There you are.” The person said waking Nicholai from his daydream. “I’ve been looking all over for you.” It was Lace. Her voice to Nicholai was kind, friendly and soft hearted. He loved hearing her talk. She stood over him looking down at him with her hand to her side. She had dark reddish brunet hair which she had tied into an upward pony tail with a cream colored ribbon and had her bangs frilled to the side of her eyes. Her eyes were a splendid light ocean blue. She wore a small silver necklace with a sapphire crystal in the shape of a flower that shinned with the sun’s light. The necklace was given to her from Lance as a birthday gift. She also wore light blue long sleeve jacket that came just above her waist over a white v-neck shirt. and long tight, light brown pants with slender boots. Her whole appearance was grand beauty to Nicholai, as it always was.

He simply gave a smile at her question and asked “Why?” She thought about what to say, and finding no good answers, changed the subject with another question “What were you doing?” she asked already knowing the answer.

 “Just thinking, you know the usual” Nicholai answered as he turned his gaze to look past her.

“about what?” She asked with a cute shy playful gesture of interest.

Nicholai looked at her for moment, then put a finger to her face as if to push her back with it, and said winking at her with a smile “Now, That’s a secret.”

Lace smiled and laughed at Nicholai’s gesture and responded. “I bet it was about your great heroic adventures again.” She said as she moved to the side and sat beside him.

  Nicholai watched her and responded sarcastically playful “You think you know me so well don’t you?”

 “Of course I do,” She said looking up at the sky as a cool wind blow past her, making a few strands of her hair fly into her eyes, she then brushed it away. The scene made Nicholai speechless for awhile. It made her look stunningly beautiful as it gave her an even more angelic appearance and Nicholai remembered why he liked her so much.

 The fact was that Nicholai and Lace spent so much time together when Lance was away, that she knew Nicholai well enough to know what he was thinking most of the time, and this was one of those times. In fact, even though she said what she said, she knew he was thinking of the past. He had been doing that for a while now. She didn’t quite know why, “the past is past” was what she came to think. She didn’t care on if she ever found out about her origins, she had a family and friends that loved and cared about her.

  It had been two weeks since Lance was away this time, so the two decided to wait for him at the entrance to the village. He told them that he would return at noon two weeks after his leave. So until noon they decided to sit at the tree and talk about what type of adventures Lance might have had this time, how he must have seen many things in the land and how he would bring something back for the both of them.

  When they were younger the three would dream up stories of heroic knights battling fears enemies and saving the world. Nicholai loved hearing about the real hero’s and how they saved the world from the evils of the world.

 

 It didn’t take long for the day to pass. Nicholai and Lace were having so much fun talking about Lance that they almost missed his arrival. As soon as they realized the time they got to their feet and raced to the meeting spot where they saw Timothy, he was wearing his best normal attire, which was a pale green shirt and a pair of light brown long pants. He was also waiting, only he was waiting for his brother. They greeted each other with a smile and a hand shake. Nicholai and Timothy were really close as friends.

 

 Timothy or Timmy for short, was five years younger then Nicholai, but he was extremely smart. Him and his father worked on damaged GARDs that they would find on old battle fields. Timmy and his father had been building a custom GARD that would be just for Chris, Timmy’s older bother who was the same age as Nicholai but always left with Lance out of the village.

 Timmy had black hair and brown eyes, he always wore long army green pants stained with grease and oil, and a green shirt. Even if you didn’t know him, you could tell that his favorite color was green.

 Timmy’s house was on a cliff that half circled the village. They had hollowed out the cliff and made it into a secret hanger for their GARDs. They had two warrior types and two small bird types.

 The bird types were the type used for one person travel. It had two machine guns for minimal defense. They were also smaller then the average GARD, so even with the weapons, they would not be able to stand against a normal size fully armored and fully armed Imperial GARD.

  

So the three waited a few hours until the sun began to set, they began to realize that something was not right, that there must have been a problem. Where were they? Lance and Chris, was there really a problem? These were the questions they were asking themselves. They decided to go further down the path, which turn round a tall hill which cradled the village from the outside. Once they got to the bend the show what they hoped was not real. They saw both Lance and Chris on horse back heading toward them and behind them, a group of three Imperial Warrior GARDs chasing them. It appeared that the Imperial GARDs had been fighting while Lance and Chris got away. A dark green armored GARD flow past them and landed in side the village catching everyone off guard. It was most likely the leader of the group as it shared the marking of a commanding officers unit. The other two units followed and did the same.

 Once landing, they open fired on the two travelers, missing them by feet. It was clear that the GARDs weren’t trying to kill them, but merely trying to stop them. “Why?” was the real question now.

 Timmy couldn’t just watch as his bother was attacked, he ran home being careful not to be seen by the attacking GARDs. Nicholai was stunned to the point of being paralyzed that he didn’t know what to do.

 While Lace ran toward Lance and Chris leaving Nicholai alone, she wanted to be near Lance incase anything happened to him.

Then green GARD turned its attention toward Nicholai and took aim with it’s gun. The unit was just about to fire when it was hit from the side creating an explosion that knocked Nicholai off his feet. Once he hit the ground he realized what was happening and decided to take shelter behind  the wall of the steep hill.

 The Imperial GARDs stopped their attack to aid and cover their fallen commander who was already getting up, and the cannon that had shot it was destroyed by one of the two trooper units. Nicholai looked over at where Lace had ran off to and saw that she, Lance and Chris were alright and were close to where he was. Lace had hopped in to Lances horse when he had got close to her.

 Once they had gotten to him. Chris, Lance and Lace dismounted from the horses and the four hide and thought of a plan to defeat their intruders which was not going to be easy.

 Mean while the Imperial GARDs were taking down the villages hidden defenses one by one, until the village was finally disarmed and helpless.

 “We have taken your village hostage.” said a voice that came from the green unit. It was quite hard to tell if the voice was male or female. “come out or I will start killing them one by one” it said again as it raised it’s gun to take aim at a family that was huddled together.

 “I have no choice” Lance said looking down.

 “What do you mean?” Nicholai and Lace said at once. Chris put his hand out to stop Nicholai and Lace. “Their after me.” Lance admitted looking up at Lace with eyes of remorse and sorrow. It was clear what he was planning to do. Tears ran down Lace’s face as she got the message in Lance’s look. Nicholai was still lost and could figure out what was happening “What was Lance talking about? Why would they be after him?” He kept asking himself over and over, until Lance got up and placed a hand on Nicholai’s shoulder. Then he turned to Chris and said “Watch over them” as he walked out into the clear where the Imperial GARDs were. The events in that spot were so hectic that Nicholai didn’t hear what the green GARD had said before… Gun fire, Nicholai turned in time to see Lance be ripped apart by the units shots which were half the size of a person. Blood splattered everywhere. Some had even landed on the now three in hiding. The shock of losing Lance in such a graphic way had begun to push Nicholai over the edge. Behind him Lace was also suffering from her own trama as the blood had splattered across her face.

 He could feel a rush of hatred and darkness fill his soul and that’s when he heard it.

“Let me fight” it was the voice from his dreams, the one that wished to kill him.

“Let me take care of this” it said in a fears and dark tone.

The power of it was too over whelming, all at once Nicholai let out a mighty scream, and ever thing went black.

  Even though he could not see, he could feel and hear what was happening. He could also feel his senses begin to leave him. He could hear and feel what used to be his hand hit against one of the units, and instead of breaking his hand, damage the metal armor. Then his sense of feeling left him and he heard the sounds of gun fire and shots zooming past him. Then he heard someone yell, but then his hearing left him.

He was alone in darkness, just drifting peacefully now, not knowing what was going on outside. He wanted to know if his friends were alright, if Lace was safe. But there was no way for him to know now. So he drifted in the silence, the calm and peaceful silence, until he finally awoke.


Monday, February 13, 2006

hm..

maybe i should go back to this.
there'll be alot of changes.. well i guess i'll work on something.



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